Showing posts with label Matched Trilogy. Show all posts
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Saturday, 1 November 2014

Review: Atlantia


Can you hear Atlantia breathing?

For as long as she can remember, Rio has dreamt of the sand and sky Above—of life beyond her underwater city of Atlantia. But in a single moment, all her plans for the future are thwarted when her twin sister, Bay, makes an unexpected decision, stranding Rio Below. Alone, ripped away from the last person who knew Rio’s true self—and the powerful siren voice she has long hidden—she has nothing left to lose.

Guided by a dangerous and unlikely mentor, Rio formulates a plan that leads to increasingly treacherous questions about her mother’s death, her own destiny, and the complex system constructed to govern the divide between land and sea. Her life and her city depend on Rio to listen to the voices of the past and to speak long-hidden truths.


I honestly believe that each one of Ms. Condie's novels is better than the last. It makes me wonder how long she can keep this up.

"Atlantia" has the same strengths as the "Matched" trilogy, and more. It has the same elegant, minimalist writing style. There are loving but complicated relationships between family and lovers (you don't need a hero vs. villain divide to write good conflict). There are strong, but subtle messages: don't hide your talents; have a say in how your community runs; question everything; treat outsiders with respect. 

However, anyone who's read the "Matched" books might remember a certain vagueness about the world building. We never did find out how Cassia "sorts". In this area, Ms. Condie has decidedly improved. J. K. Rowling she is not, but we know that Atlantia is built in the form of interconnected bubbles; that they mine ore in exchange for food sent down by their counterpart city Above; that Rio, the heroine, is a mechanic who fixes the mining drones. We know that living underwater caused strange mutations, the sirens and the blue-winged bats, and that these "miracles" helped to inspire a religion that both inspires people and is used by their leaders to control them. We know that Rio solders back the leaves that fall from the metal trees around the temple. We know the different social classes, that wood is a status symbol because it has to be imported, that one marketplace is more disorganized than the other, that you can buy scented air there like candy - cinnamon, lavender, saffron - and illegal night races take place. The general and the specific - both are important for a fictional world to feel real, and this one does.

Besides the world, I also really liked Rio. As a siren, a mutant with a voice that can control minds, she's had to keep her true nature a secret all her life to avoid being used as a tool by the government. Even as it is, her deliberately flat voice makes people think of her as stupid. When her mother dies and her twin sister Bay leaves her behind, she's left alone without anyone who knows who she really is. I don't think Ms. Condie meant this deliberately, but it reminded me of people on the autism spectrum - how people think of them as geniuses, freaks or both. "Sirens are miracles, not people," Rio once heard a city council member say. Her mother replies: "How can anyone think that? People can be miracles."

Anyone who's ever felt lonely or marginalized will relate to Rio, but she's more than that. She has business sense, which sadly, not many YA heroines have. When Bay leaves, she is understandably heartbroken, but pulls herself together to investigate the truth. Needing lots of money to buy an air tank to swim to the surface, she overcomes her shy, secretive nature to become a star performer at the swimming races. With the help of True Beck, a handsome fellow mechanic, and her aunt Maire's instructions on how to use her siren power, she turns herself into an escape artist, an underwater Houdini. She does take serious risks, but that's understandable, since the person offering her help is Maire, who may not be trustworthy. Learning to trust True, control her gift, and help to free her society from centuries of bigotry and hate, Rio becomes a heroine to be proud of.

Maire, the only other "free" siren and too powerful for their leaders to control, was the last person to see Rio's mother Oceana alive. Fingers point to her as Oceana's killer. Did she do it, and if so, why? Rio fears her, but no one else can teach her how to use her gift. Maire's power shows in the way she can not only control people, but hear the voices of those long gone caught inside the city's walls. She tells Rio an alternative version of the history she's been taught in school and the temple. But which version is true? I can't say too much about her because of spoilers, but to me, she was the most fascinating character in the book.

Bay is another character I liked, even though she's not there for so much of the book. She comes alive in Rio's memories as Rio struggles to figure out the reasons for her betrayal. All their lives, Bay was considered the "good" sister: gentle, soft-spoken, pious and patriotic, following in their mother's footsteps as future leader. Until she sold their mother's precious ring, left the money with Maire of all people, and disappeared. As Maire points out, there is no such thing as a good twin and an evil twin. No matter how much people love each other, they can still cause pain and misunderstanding. It's up to Rio to find out the truth.

The only reason I didn't give this book five stars was because of Atlantia's politicians, who could have been better developed. I know Ms. Condie was trying to make a point about how easy it is to abuse power, and how many people don't question it, just like the Society Officials in "Matched". But I would have liked to see three-dimensional human beings, even corrupt ones, rather than faceless obstacles to freedom.

Another minor flaw is the romance. True is a sweet young man and perfect for Rio; not only do they have their mechanical talent in common, but he respects her enough to let her make her own decisions, even if they might put her in danger - but not without speaking his mind about them. He also has secrets of his own, which make him empathize with her need to keep hers; a nice change from the "You lied to me! I'll never forgive you!" scenario we get in other books. However, he was just a little too perfect to seem real. As for the kissing, Salt Lake City-born Ms. Condie does leave a little too much to the imagination. Honestly, I've read sexier scenes in Dickens. 

Still, I really recommend this book. It may not be as fast-paced or graphic as "The Hunger Games", "The Mortal Instruments" or other bestsellers, but it has its own subtle, quiet beauty. Also, no love triangles - which, for all I loved "Matched", I found really refreshing. 

Also published on Goodreads.

Sunday, 19 January 2014

Antidotes For "Twilight": YA Romances Done Right

Originally published in Positively Smitten on December 12, 2013.

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(Attention: This article contains spoilers for the works of fiction mentioned.)

Girl meets boy. Girl finds out boy is a hundred-year-old vampire thirsting for her blood and falls madly in love with him. Vampire abandons girl. Girl uses good-natured werewolf friend as emotional crutch, leading him on in his love for her without returning it. Girl jumps off a cliff to hallucinate vampire’s voice. Girl marries vampire straight out of high school without even considering a career. Girl gives birth to a human-vampire hybrid that tries to eat her from the inside, necessitating her painful transformation into one of the undead. Girl accepts werewolf, who declares the newborn baby his destined mate, as future son-in-law. They live happily ever after.
What more could you ask of a love story?
It turns out, a lot.
Before I continue, I must admit that, yes, there is such a thing as an intelligent Twilight fan. I’ve read many of their stories on Fanfiction.net, often clever, funny, well-written and insightful. Stephenie Meyer’s world can be quite compelling in its emotional intensity, its twists on the old myths (Sparkling vampires? You’ve got to admit that’s original!), and its seductive images of eternal love and youth. As a teenager, I could easily see myself in the heroine. However, the series’ charm is also one of its biggest problems. Is Bella Swan really the role model we want our daughters and sisters to live up to?
This holiday season, allow me to present a few alternatives …

  1. Fairest by Gail Carson Levine
This is a retelling of the fairy tale “Snow White”, a story about the pursuit of beauty and its cost. Aza is an overweight girl with unusual coloring in a society obsessed with certain ideals of beauty; the unkindness of her peers have made her hate herself so much that she cannot appreciate the uniqueness of her talents, especially her voice. Ijori is a kind young man who loves her for exactly who she is, regrets and makes up for his mistakes. They bond over what they have in common: a quirky sense of humor, a love of music, and a shared concern for the threat to their kingdom presented by the vain and selfish queen. Physical beauty, in this story, is only skin deep; it’s the beauty of the characters’ courage and talent that helps them save the day.

  1. The Matched Trilogy by Ally Condie
Yes, it’s a love triangle. But unlike some, it’s a love triangle in which all three sides are truly making an effort to be honest and considerate of each other, even the two rivals. The series is set in a dystopian future in which government officials choose where you work, what you eat, when you die and whom you marry. When seventeen-year-old Cassia is assigned two matches by accident, a crack appears in her illusion of a perfect life that slowly grows to shatter it, inspiring her to think for herself, discover her potential, and fight for what she believes in. Choosing between the two boys is only part of the story; a dangerous journey through the canyons of Utah, an epidemic threatening the country, a shifting political climate, and the power of poetry all contribute to the three main characters’ evolution. Condie’s elegant, minimalist writing style is only the icing on the cake.

  1. The Ruby Red Trilogy by Kerstin Gier
Gwen Shepherd likes pretty clothes, speaks in pop-culture references and prefers watching movies to studying. She is also a time traveler with a responsibility to stop a power-hungry eighteenth-century alchemist from attaining immortality. Everyone expects her to fail: her enemy, her jealous cousin, sometimes even herself. She proves them spectacularly wrong. As for her teammate Gideon, who begins by looking down his nose at her lack of education, he ends up owing his life to her courage and falling in love with her wit and charm. He is a hero of the Mr. Darcy stripe, who is not ashamed to admit when he is wrong, and Gwen is a heroine who proves that being smart and being girly are not mutually exclusive. Bonus for Gwen’s sassy friend Leslie, who does not drop out of the story, but becomes one of her most important allies despite having no special powers whatsoever.

4. The Blue Bloods series by Melissa de la Cruz
To imagine this series, take Twilight and turn it on its head. Bloodsucking vampires? Yes – but only by consent and for mutual pleasure. Wealth, privilege, magic and immortality? Yes – but be careful what you wish for, as most vampires are a lazy, corrupt bunch who are fairly helpless before a genuine threat. Eternal soulmate bonds? Yes – but like any relationship, they can and do go sour unless enough effort goes into keeping them. The main characters include a man torn between his bondmate and the woman he truly loves; a girl fighting against demonic possession with her own strong will and the support of her lover; and a spoiled socialite learning to care for others besides herself. The character development from the first to the last book is remarkable, and the worldbuilding so believable that you’ll be looking twice at every New York celebrity to check for fangs.

These are my gift ideas for young women in love with love stories, which will make their hearts beat faster and teach them to value themselves. A truly beautiful romance is one that inspires both partners to love and respect each other – and we can never see enough of those, either in real life or in fiction.